Week four best and worst
Best:Na’ashjéii Asdzáá
A new light in Yahoo Poetry (Oops! It's just Nancy having us on:)
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HD makes the list of course!
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This is a cute little poem but because it is not so serious or so incredible it shouldn't be on my best list. It is there because everyone else is Yahoo has apparently abandoned poetry for Greek Wars.
Thank you, Funky:
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Worst:
Synopsis, are we plagiarizing now?
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From Tara Mohr:
http://www.taramohr.com/2011/
And at least she meant something interesting by the term.
Dallas recounting things in a mechanical and checklist fashion (with the odd aw shucks sticking out like spelling errors inna grammar book.) You cannot skim and bog down in regionalism at the same time, D:
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Comments and Jibes
Stupid 101: weaseling for a compliment and bitching at the game you wanted to play at the same time:
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(Neonman didn't go anywhere BY THE WAY)
Libby turns psychotic (with comments in parens from me:)
All is well in this world.
(If you've never seen the garbage seas [add link here])
The grain is harvested;
(and rots on the docks)
the men are fed.
(and the women and kids go hungry)
The women share this success.
(because you don't seem to realize they do 3/4 of the work for 1/4 less pay than the men get.)
Enough said. (Hardly)
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Pity the poor soldier:
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I am going to risk a new suggestion. Since Bannibal only writes "my world is fine God bless" or "my world is dark I want to die" perhaps he could be brought into details and focus, and she could take on large as life themes, if Dallas and TBO co-wrote a poem.
Peter/Milieu up to his old games. Those of us old enough to remember saw Peter as top Answerer, no Milieu as #2, 3, 4, etc... And then one day there was Milieu, formerly known as Peter.
The quote from Peter/Milieu: "While I love and admire and respect many men, there are many more I pity and ignore. I have never been a man, (wanted to be) nor have I ever hidden a man behind my skirts, probably because I don't wear skirts."
He has loved many men and despised many more, yeah right!
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