Thursday, April 19, 2012

Best and Worst last Week of March

Week four best and worst.
Best:

At first this werk Adeline_cosine seemed to be the only player. Here is a good'un with lots of subtle meaning:

http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=Aiqjcy_PBlj.K3EFtth5qD.n5HNG;_ylv=3?qid=20120314151710AAJ8fh1

Kels gets a simple idea out beautifully:
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AtuMnrNA9pc33b45P4dzQiqn5HNG;_ylv=3?qid=20120315124815AA6mA3o

All women this week, not a surprise as the men are too busy slugging it out, but this one is unique. Every time Caz tries to write in her old jabberwocky style it falls flat ( as this one did, in an earlier version,) but unlike her other efforts this one does not fall apart by being corrected:
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=Apsz5CxbIqjeuDOXleUK5xen5HNG;_ylv=3?qid=20120317095326AAvmfF9
Bravo Caz (or whoever you are.)

Worst:

Caz, who once wrote brilliant jabberwocky is now writing drivel. What the hell happened to her "brain injury"? Is this another Yahoo fraud or am I missing something?

http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AjWm2mw8WbjUSzlSUuz.MNmn5HNG;_ylv=3?qid=20120313003419AAXhlKC

Billy, Billy, I liked this poem last week, now you strap it to a dirge and write four more lugubrious chapters. Wassamaterwitu?

http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=Aiqjcy_PBlj.K3EFtth5qD.n5HNG;_ylv=3?qid=20120314151710AAJ8fh1

Frederic picked this up, which the cow's had left, somewhere in a meadow:
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=Avb91h86fxr40Mjpp3b2sWyn5HNG;_ylv=3?qid=20120315153716AAxNvO1


Best and worst in one:

http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=Ajw8eswlhMzd9zsG2ufaN3mn5HNG;_ylv=3?qid=20120313061936AAY0T19

The first half has been rewritten out of all that it was worth and the second half works, go figure!

Lastly indeterminate -- I have been so frustrated and disappointed by Dave of late that I want to point this one out even though I hated it because it is rare anymore that he writes this competently, even though the theme goes horribly awry:
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=Ah4ZZ1eN.ttiq48FziZrCDOn5HNG;_ylv=3?qid=20120315185010AA6U1Ew

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